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Post by Jessie Winkler on Aug 9, 2009 22:25:15 GMT -4
You know this already, but lovin it!
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Post by Zero on Aug 11, 2009 18:39:10 GMT -4
Finale Part 1
Zero's beam engulfs Omega. The explosion of energy shakes the asteroid. Still Omega stands, unphased.
ZERO: He's too powerful, but I've got to fight!
Zero rushes into close quarters, his fist reared and ready to strike.
ZERO: Here culminates every battle, every experience, every lesson of my life as a teenage robot. Here in my fist is power I've gained through everyone I know, and I will honor them all by winning this battle!
Zero's fist goes in for the strike, but is quickly cuaght by Omega. He tightens his grip on Zero's fist and throws him across the rocky field, smashing several rocks. Zero regains his footing. Omega has not changed his position.
Zero bursts in a blitz of super speed and executes a series of kicking combos on Omega. He blocks them all, and the force of the blows just barely move him. Omega grabs Zero's leg and he slams into the ground before him.
OMEGA: This is the power of Earth's greatest hero? It's a wonder it lasted so long...
Zero get to his feet and takes a defensive posture.
ZERO: I'm not the only one.
OMEGA: Are you talking about the others? Why are you even speaking about them as though they are in the same league?
ZERO: We may be many, but we are all unique!
OMEGA: Look at the people you are defending! Candy abandoned the city! Chevelle opposed you! Champ is scarcely seen! Gene allowed Vexus on Earth! Jakob doesn't care for anything! You have the power to set them straight! To bring an order unprecedented!
ZERO: You talk as though I'm suppose to be a god. I'm not. Yes, I have power, but I will never use it to rule. The power I have, I use to defend those who cannot for themselves; to bring justice through truth; to inspire the good of heart to action; to live as a human and prove that all can be more than what they are!
OMEGA: How foolish. They are mere mortals, fallen from perfection. They must be guided as children. Your humanity has only lessened your power.
ZERO: You lost humanity and became a power-mad monster! I will not allow this kind of power to run rampant, even if it kills me!
OMEGA: And leave the world in their frail hands?
ZERO: I believe in them, and they believe in me. You WILL respect them all!
Zero's chest bolt begins to shine.
OMEGA: Wha...?
ZERO: I'll show what real power is!
Zero swings his right fist and punches Omega square in his face. Omega is knocked so hard he skids across the ground for 200 yards. He slowly rises, realizing that Zero has reached his full potential. Zero floats above him.
OMEGA: Finally. You've embraced your power, though I am still so very disappointed.
Omega rushes and throws hist left fist. Zero catches it, but Omega follows with a right uppercut. Zero is knocked back, but lands on his feet. They stare down each other again.
OMEGA: You need your friends for your power. I don't. My power is divine! I am the Messiah!
Zero's light shines brighter.
Omega's aura grows.
Who holds true power?
END Part 1
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Post by Zero on Aug 12, 2009 20:34:54 GMT -4
Finale Part 2
The battle between Zero and Omega can be heard on Earth.
ALEX: It's too much. Why does Zero need to do this alone?
CHEVELLE: In know Z. He's not one to give up. Stubborn to the finish.
Zero and Omega trade blows. Over and over they knock each other back and forth.
CHAMP: Power to dominate. Power to inspire. These are the two ideals personified by them. Why them I may never know.
The intensity of their battle shakes the asteroid, weakening it's stability in orbit.
HEDGEHOG: Whatever the power they have, this is about victory or defeat.
Omega throws a fist that is caught by Zero. Zero too attempts a strike but is caught by Omega. They hold their ground locked in struggle. The ground tremors.
JENNY: This is a fight between to men with two ideals, but this isn't a holy war. It's a fight for truth and justice.
Jessie looks to the sky. Her nerves make her hold her chest tight.
JESSIE: Zero...
She is comforted by White Lightening.
WL: Just hold on to hope.
The ground begin to crack under Zero and omega. Zero fires his optic beam into Omega's face. Their lock is broken.
As the smoke clears, Zero has lost sight of Omega. He looks around. Omega flies right behind him and tackles him. Zero tries to get up, but Omega punches his face into the ground three times.
He grabs Zero's cape and swings him, slamming Zero into the ground twice. The asteroid shakes ever more. Zero get to his feet with his cape still in Omega's grip. He jerks forward, pulling Omega and throwing him off balance. Zero turns around with a roundhouse kick. Omega loses his grip on Zero's cape and is knocked into a rock wall.
Omega recovers and breaks the wall from it's foundation. He flies about Zero with it and throws the rock down. Zero throws an uppercut that splits it into, but Omega goes through the crack and moves in to punch Zero.
Zero side steps the punch, and Omega strikes the ground. Zero fires his optic beam, and Omega shoots back with his. A beam struggle ensues.
Both robots give it their all, driven by the need for victory. The beams cancel each other out in a massive explosion. They both rush at each other again, and the melee continues.
The force of their battle is finally enough to push the asteroid out of orbit, and it slowly begins to descend.
END Part 2
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Post by White Lightning on Aug 12, 2009 22:13:00 GMT -4
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Post by Zoomer on Aug 12, 2009 22:40:17 GMT -4
^ Yeah, what she said.
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Post by Jessie Winkler on Aug 12, 2009 23:19:20 GMT -4
Agreed!
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Post by Zero on Aug 12, 2009 23:52:33 GMT -4
Finale Part 3
The asteroid rumbles as it hits Earth's atmosphere. A red aura forms as it enters. This catches Zero's attention.
OMEGA: Can you see it? It's the end of your reign! This rock will land in Tremorton and destroy the corrupt system you allowed to fester!
ZERO: I promise you Omega, that great city will survive!
OMEGA: You'll never get the chance to save it!
Omega lunges and tackles Zero at the waist. Zero kicks him off, then Omega counters with his optic beam. He keeps Zero down.
Zero struggles to get up, but Omega increases his beam. Zero clenches the ground and rips up a slab to block Omega's beams. He pushes his way to Omega slowly.
Omega stops his beam and slaps the rock out of Zero's hand, then Zero rushes in and gives Omega a head-butt. He grabs Omega as he recoils and knees him in the face, followed by a three hit combo.
The ground shakes again as the asteroid falls further. The heat increases and all the surroundings go red. Palms Zero in the face and elbows him into the ground. He sits on Zero and pummles him.
OMEGA: You're FAILING! Time is running out! As long as you continue to oppose me, this conflict will ravage all for eternity! Tremorton and it's inhabitants will be DAMNED!
The inhabitant. The people. Zero can't stop Omega while they are too evenly matched. He needs more power. He CAN get more. All he needs to do is know why he fights and who for.
ZERO: Jessie...
Zero works his legs free and kicks Omega off, then in a blitz of speed and power punches Omega so hard he's thrown from the asteroid.
With Omega momentarily out of the picture, Zero turns his attention to the asteroid. He leaps off the edge and flies to it's side. He's never pushed an object so massive before.
He takes hold and focuses all his energy.
ZERO: Got to change the trajectory, just enough...
The momentum created by Earth's gravity makes the asteroid feel heavier than it is. Still, Zero pushes.
ZERO: C'mon MOOOOOOOVE!!!
His gears begin to strain, his armor overheats. Then, slowly, the asteroid shifts. Zero keeps the force up. Then releases it
Zero is exhausted, but the city is safe.
Suddenly, Omega is back. He grabs Zero by the arm, and in fit of rage, twists it to the breaking point.
ZERO: AARRGGH!!!!
Zero tries to kick him off, but Omega grabs the leg with his other arm and snaps it backwards. Omega throws Zero down to the asteroid.
Battered, Zero has used up too much energy. His body is now too damaged to fight back.
ZERO: Ugh...
Omega lands in front of him.
OMEGA: I am Zero Omega! I am the Messiah, the heart of this universe! This is the end for you XJ-0!
END Part 3
TOMORROW- Finale Part 4 and Epilogue!
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Post by Zoomer on Aug 13, 2009 0:05:10 GMT -4
The suspense is killing me! X___X
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Post by Zero on Aug 13, 2009 16:57:50 GMT -4
Finale Part 4
Zero is in shock. His limbs damaged, he stays down, unable to move. Omega kneels down to his face.
OMEGA: It's finished. Let go and leave the world to me.
Omega rises and begins to leave. Still down, Zero speaks.
ZERO: No... it's not over. Jenny will never accept you. No one will.
Omega turns around.
OMEGA: They'll have to. We are two of the same heart. The universe needs a Zero, and with you gone, I will be the only one, the right one to serve has savior.
Zero slams his good hand to the ground. To Omega's surprise, he manages to stand balance on his feet, despite the damage done to one of them.
ZERO: Omega! You will never be a true hero! Every choice you've made, every action that has led to this point... is the result of unchecked, self serving power!
Omega glares.
ZERO: The path of power that leads to the likes of you... I will break!
OMEGA: You can barely stand, let alone fight. You don't have the power.
ZERO: My power is a kind that cannot be weakened nor lost. Let's go. One more Time.
Unsteady, but determined Zero raises his fists.
ZERO: Bring it!
OMEGA: Such a waste...
Omega rushes and attacks Zero. Zero cannot fight back, but holds his ground and takes every blow dealt to him.
OMEGA: There's no way you can defeat me!
ZERO: Yes! There is a way!
Zero suddenly drops his defense, and allows a stunned Omega to strike him dead in the chest. Omega's fist ruptures Zero's battery. It releases a torrent of stored energy that engulfs them both, followed by an explosion that cracks the asteroid. It begins to fall apart.
Zero stands alone, clutching his chest.
Out of the dust, Omega steps forward. His own body is wrecked, with an arm missing and part of his face blown away. He can barely stand himself.
OMEGA: You... Why?
ZERO: I have... someone to fight for. My purpose is served. The world will always have Jenny, and she will inspire more heroes like me. She's the universes true heart. You lost you purpose, and therefore cannot exist.
Omega begins to disintegrate.
OMEGA: This... is... impossible...
He falls apart, his energy released as flames, and he disappears from existence.
Zero falls to his knees. There's a hole in his chest where his battery was.
ZERO: All... t-things are-e... possible...
END Finale
Later tonight: Epilogue.
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Post by Hunter on Aug 13, 2009 17:13:15 GMT -4
ZERO used SELFDESTRUCT! It's super effective! Enemy OMEGA fainted! ZERO fainted!
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Post by Zoomer on Aug 13, 2009 17:22:39 GMT -4
Well.....that was definitely going out with a bang.
Oh, and the pokemon joke? *FACEPALMS*
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Post by Zero on Aug 13, 2009 17:40:12 GMT -4
The conclusion will be up around 9 pm tonight or a bit after. Thanks for the comments and I hope you enjoyed this story!
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Post by Zero on Aug 13, 2009 21:56:21 GMT -4
Epilogue Tremorton. The explosion can be seen from town. CHAMP: Do you see anything Jenny? JENNY: It too bright to tell. Jessie stared into the sky wide eyed. As the light from the explosion clears, thousands of shooting stars fill the sky. CHEVELLE: Whoa. That must have been one epic finish. The people of the city go outside and view the sight. The shooting stars shine brighter as the sun sets. ALEX: Uh guys, do you think he made it? WL: ... JENNY: Zero... JAKOB: That idiot! Why do superhero types need to pull the lone ranger stint?! JESSIE: No... it's okay. All eyes are on Jessie. JESSIE: Whatever the outcome(chokes)... Zero has always done what was for the best. She covers her eyes. JESSIE: Hope can never die. Jessie leaves them running, and heads to the forest. JANE: Jess... Alone, Jessie kneels over in dread and sorrow. She cries. Soon she calms down. She wipes the tears from her eyes as she looks up. JESSIE: Zero, if you can hear me... you believed in us, and fought so we can believe in ourselves. To be more than what we are. You'll see Zero... I'll do my best! Your faith was not misplaced. We'll make this world a better place. Where our light will shine brightest in even the darkest of days. She holds her heart. JESSIE: I'll always love you. Always. You were light. My light. ... ..... ......... THE END
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Post by Zoomer on Aug 13, 2009 22:20:45 GMT -4
You know, it was good. Really kind of sad, though......and then you have the logistical problem of you killing off your own OC.
Really, I don't mean to be harsh. It was awesome overall. : l
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Post by omnios on Aug 13, 2009 22:23:53 GMT -4
"He lived a warrior, died a hero. May his Spark join the Matrix, the greatest of Cybertron."---Optimus Primal, Beast Wars episode Code of Hero
Well, look on the bright side: at least he can be of use as a lawn gnome...
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