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Post by Champ on Jun 21, 2006 22:37:50 GMT -4
Chapter 11:forces
Champ entered this new world at the city limits, the sign read "The city of Townsville". 'these people just WANT to be confusing.' Alice thought. Their was a strange crashing, and several lasers shot through the air, Champ dashed to the scene. 6 super powered teens were trying to fight a fat man. He was eating everything, walls, people, it was disturbing. They were trying mostly frontal attacks. Champ knew this was a fools strategy. Your supposed to attack from the back. Champ manuevered himself behind the man, and struck a blow down his back. The man screamed. He turned around, trying to take a bite out of Champ. The super powered teens took they're shot, but they knocked the man into Champ, he fell on him. Champ felt his bones breaking as the man tryed to turn around, Champ heard a high pitched noise, he flattened himself against the pavement as a giant laser blast obliterated the man. "Hello!" Said Omnios. *** Alice had decided to go to the ball. She was permitted two guests, she knew Champ was too busy, it hurt her, but his duty was so much more important. She had invited Ruri and Alexander to come along with her. Ruri was her assistant of types, and Alexander was there to protect her. "Do you think i'm making the right move, Ruri." Alice asked one day. "In all honesty." Said the girl. "I think it's a trap." Alice smiled. "The best way to beat a trap is to spring it." *** "So, you've found the home town of the Rowdyruff boys and the Powerpuff girls." Said Eric. "Yeah." Champ said, walking over to the body of his foe. He wasn't dead! He had no limbs, but he was alive. Champ saw an odd mark on his tongue, which was hanging out. A dragon that appeared to be eating itself. For some reason he felt compelled to stab through it. He did. There was a terrible hissing, and the monster dissolved. "So that is how you kill a Homunculus" He said.
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Post by Champ on Jun 24, 2006 13:53:05 GMT -4
Chapter 12:Labyrinth 'alright.' Alice thought to Champ. 'theres something i need you to get me from this next dimension. 'How do i get it?' he thought. 'and while i'm at it, why don't you talk to me, since i'm standing in the doorway dimension?' 'I'm busy.' She thought. 'Ruri will help you.' Ruri than walked up to her brother. "Well, lets go." She said. *** They entered a lab in the next dimension, there was a small red headed boy running around a building stuff. "WHO ARE YOU!" he shouted, drawing a gun. "Alice sent us." Ruri said. The boy lowered his weapon. Champ found it extraordinary how many people had heard of Alice. "Why are you here?" He asked. "We need the roblade." Ruri said. "I can't just GIVE you my greatest invention." He said. "What do we have to do?" "Go through." He grinned. "My maze." Walls dropped from the ceiling, and soon a great labyrinth had been built. "If you get to the right side, you get the sword, if you get to the left side, you die. Of course, you could die before you get there." The boy said. Ruri took of to the farthest left side of the maze. "Ruri, wrong..." Champ started. "Trust me." Said Ruri. They had barely ran 5 steps when robots dropped from the ceiling. That was too easy. Champ went into his lightning form and quickly short circuited all of them. The next obstacle was several flame throwers, Champ blew them up, he caught on. The entire maze relied on electricity. Champ let off an incredible burst of lightning. The maze was powerless. Champ followed Ruri through the rest of the maze. Power was restored to the lab right as they reaced the end. Champ stared. Gigantic blades spun there. He stared as Ruri ran through them. "It was a hologram." Ruri said. She held a sword made of white metal with a light blue extension. "This is what we came for." Ruri said. "One of the last inventions of Nora wakeman, the roblade. Above the lab a woman stared down at the blade. "It's perfect." She said.
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Post by Champ on Jul 24, 2006 12:25:55 GMT -4
Chapter 13:The cheapest immitations As Champ walked to the next universe a familiar person fell into step behind him. "Jenny?" Champ asked. "What are you doing here?" "Alice told me to go with you." Jenny said. "Whatever." Champ said. They walked into the bright light of the next dimension. They were standing on a bridge, and the bridge was covered in slimes. Champ felt something sweep passed him, and some weight lift, and he remembered, he hadn't returned the Roblade. The slime that had taken it took it to one of the bridges towers. There was a woman in a red cloak with green goggles. Next to her was a small robot that looked like a younger, male, version of Jenny. The woman tossed him the Roblade. "Lets see what you make of a Nora Wakeman weapon." The woman said. The robot leapt down to the pavement, and rushed at Champ and Jenny. "I'll leave him to you." Champ said to Jenny, taking off to one of the bridge's sides. Jenny activated her Shiva sword mode. She clased with the other robot, it became obvious that the Roblade was the strongest blade of the seven, but Jenny fought it off. The robot proceeded to do a number of spinning attacks, and flips. They caught Jenny off guard, but it was obvious that the boy's swordplay was poor. "Who are you supposed to be?" Jenny asked, parrying another less than stellar attack. "I'm Robotboy!" The robot shouted furiously, swinging the sword as hard as he could. "Right, well that sword is...." Jenny started, she waited, he swung, and she caught the sword in her hand. "Mine." She wrenched the sword away from him, and glanced at it for a moment. Suddenly a mass of wires erupted from it's frame, and attached themselves to Jenny. In Jenny's mind the message "Roblade interface online. Release?" appeared. She didn't know what it meant by Release, but she accepted. The blade split down the middle, and several blades that looked like Jenny's pigtails showed, and began rotating. 'It's not a sword, it's a chainsaw!' Jenny thought. Robotboy threw himself at Jenny, and without thinking she blocked with her arm, the arm with the Roblade attached. Robotboy was cut in half. ********************88 The woman wasn't sure what to do about Champ, she had a gun, but Champ simply blocked it with the mana sword. He lunged at her, and cut her mask off. She was a woman of about 35, she had blonde hair in a ponytail, and had a generally intelligent look about her. "I guess it's not my time to defeat you." She said, she opened a portal, and dissapeared. 'Looks like the enemy is recruiting more allies than we thought.' Alice said. 'Scary thought.' Champ said.
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Post by Champ on Jul 26, 2006 18:22:53 GMT -4
Chapter 14 Feudal The next universe wasn't truly a seperate universe, but a seperate timeframe. Champ stepped out onto a well. 'Huh, you seem to be in Feudal Japan.' Alice thought to him. An arrow shot past Champ, he whipped around, sword at the ready. "What are you doing here?" asked a girl with black hair, she wore modern clothes, and her bow was at the ready, charged with energy. "I'm hunting an organization that identifies itself as the 'Cancellation squad.'" "Why do you think they're here?" The girl asked. "Just a hunch." Champ responded. "Now, if you'll put down your weapon I will gladly cooperate." The girl lowered her bow. "I'm Kagome, who are you?" She asked. "Champ Mars, I'm with the Gateway organization." He said. "Like, the computer company?" Kagome asked, confused. "No, it's an inter-universal defense organization." Champ said. The girl was about to ask another question when there was a rumbling. A body, with a man's head grinned down at them. "NARAKU!" Kagome shouted. A red blur shot past Champ, Naraku knocked whatever it was away. There was a thud as it landed, and Champ saw a boy about his age laying there in all red. But he was different, he had dog ears and silver hair. "Inuyasha!" Kagome cried. "I'm alright." The boy said, shrugging. Suddenly another form appeared behind them. It was made of water, and bore a female face. "Naraku." It said. "Barry thought you might need my help." "Dealing with these imbeciles?" Naraku asked. "Barry is conceited." "So will you not accept my help?" The woman asked. "Actually, I want to try something." Naraku said, a long tentacle extended toward the woman. "I have wondered, can a demon absorb a homunculus?" The tentacle stuck in the woman, and slowly she faded. Naraku smiled as the process finished, but suddenly blue mixed with the black of his form. "I think you have an answer." The woman's voice said, coming from inside Naraku. He scowled. "Hey, Naraku!" Inuyasha said. "Are you going to fight yourself or do I get that honor?" "You know nothing!" Naraku shouted, he launched a tentacle at Inuyasha, who dodged it, and sliced at it, severing it. Kagome shot an arrow with energy at Naraku, it tore a considerable chunk out of him. Champ had an idea. He burst into lightning form and glided around Naraku, he launched the sword at him, and it tore parts off of him. Champ knew now what to do, He glided up Naraku's body as Naraku tried to grab him, he launched the sword at Naraku's head. At the same time Kagome shot an arrow at Naraku's heart, Naraku exploded, his remnants crumbled, but the homunculus he absorbed didn't die, she stood calmly on the ground and opened a portal. She glanced up at Champ. "We will meet again, shortly."She said, then she dissapeared, Champ shot to the ground and tore open a portal, convinced that soon he was going to end this battle, once and for all.
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Post by Champ on Jul 28, 2006 22:38:09 GMT -4
Chapter 15 Pride in Death Champ went through several changes in his passage to the next world. He gained black clothing, the mana sword faded, in its place was a machete. Champ wondered what this meant as he stepped out into the new world. He was on the top of a cliff, a white tower stood behind him, and a battle was in progress. Several people, about 26, stood looking up at another individual, he had orange hair and wore a cloak, he dove down to the ground, 6 people broke off to fight him. He took out five without having to draw the immense sword at his back. But he didn't see the sixth one, he was surprised when he turned around, Champ stood there, blocking the attacker. "Who are you?" The boy asked. "Champ Mars, you?" Champs said. "Ichigo Kurosaki." The boy said. "alright, Ichigo, whats going on?" Champ said, still blocking. "well, I just saved my friend Ichigo and now I have to fight all of these people." Ichigo said. The person Champ was blocking smiled. "Are you a proud individual, Champ Mars?" He asked. "No." Said Champ. "You should be proud of yourself." the man said. "Pride is a sin." Champ said. It was a joke Alice had used on a teacher when he told her to be proud of her intelligence, but Champ thought it fit the situation right now. "I am pride." The man said. Champ understood, he was a homunculus. The sword in Champ's hand shifted, it was now larger, to points extended from the end. "Shikai." Ichigo said. "You just got a special ability." Champ wasn't about to find out what it was, he clashed with Pride, suddenly sparks shot from his blade into the sky and hung there, they became great spears and shot to the ground, impaling pride. "Now, wheres your mark?" Champ asked. He saw that Pride wore and eyepatch. He lifted, the mark was there. He stabbed it and Pride went into convulsions, and faded. "Thanks for the help." Ichigo said. "No problem." Champ said. "Well, some other time, when i'm not in the middle of a rescue, come back and we can just hang out." Ichigo said. "Will do." Champ said. He left, and had a feeling that things were about to get very dangerous. **************************** Alice prepared for the ball. She was surprised when her cousin Susan came by to visit. "Why are you here?" Alice asked. "What, I can't have fun?" Susan pouted. "Why are you REALLY here?" Alice asked. "I'm going to protect you." Susan said. "That's sweet, but I'll be fine." Alice said. "Alice, you know this is a trap." Susan said. "I know, so I'll spring it." Alice said. "Why aren't you going to tell Champ?" Susan said. "Because then he'll come running back." Alice said. "Why don't you want him to?" Susan asked. "I don't want him to feel like I'm defensless." Alice said. "Alice, you've got to get over your pride." Susan said. "It's going to cost you everything." "Pride is a sin." Alice said. "It's your sin." Susan said. Alice thought about that.
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Post by Zero on Jul 28, 2006 22:51:34 GMT -4
This is REALLY good. I wonder how it's gonna end.
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Post by Champ on Jul 29, 2006 1:16:47 GMT -4
Chapter 16 Crashing the party Champ was surprised to find Ruri, Arteman, Jenny and Brad waiting for him. "What's going on?" He asked. "Alice is in trouble." Said Jenny. "She's just too stubborn to allow you to help her." "What do you mean?" Champ asked. "She's going to a ball hosted by the dark side of the gateway organization." Arteman said. "Where?" Champ asked. "It's in a cathedral that floats from world to world." Ruri said. "I can take you there now." "Then lets go." Champ said. *********** They found it in a city underground in one of the worlds, a young boy in a red jacket stared at the doorway. "Hey, who are you?" Champ asked. "I'm Edward Elric." He said, clapping his hands, he drew them along one of his arms, a sword extended out of his sleeve. "The Fullmetal alchemist." "Do you think you could help us?" Champ asked. "How?" Ed asked. "Theres these things, the homunculus..." Champ started. "Oh!" Said Ed. "So, we're here for the same reason." "I guess." Champ said. "Than lets go." He said. The group pulled the door open. They were in a churchlike area, pews lined the hall, but instead of a cross at the end, there was a huge X. A woman stood near the back of the hall, she was young, she had black hair and wore a red dress. "So, I see all of my enemies are in one place." Said the woman. "And all of my remaining sins." The remaining homunculus appeared, it was 6 on 5. Jenny fought Lust, Brad battled Sloth, Ed fought Greed, Ruri fought Wrath, and Arteman fought Envy. Champ, however, turned his attention to the woman, he ran down the hall, and leaped into the air to attack her, but found himself caught, Sloth had caught him within her body. He changed into his flame form , and she screamed as her body evaporated. "One down." Champ said. Suddenly Greed ran past Champ, he tried to attack the woman, but she held out a skull, Greed froze, and Lust impaled him on one of her nails. "Two down." Champ said now, despite his confusion. Lust was the next to attack. She extended her nails, only to have them be cut off, leaving her wide open. "3 down." Champ said. Wrath lunged at him, kicking a clawing at him furiosly. "You killed Mama Lust!" He shouted, but on one of his attacks he revealed his oroborous to Champ. Champ took the opporotunity. "That makes 4 down." He said. "One to go." The woman scowled, Envy turned around, and suddenly transformed, he was a great writhing dragon, and he lunged, not at Champ, but Edward. He caught Ed in his jaws, Ed fought desperately to keep from being swallowed. Champ jumped up and cut the length of Envy's body, seperating him into two parts. He transformed back, and Ed stabbed his oroborous. ] "5 down, none to go." Champ said. The woman stared at Champ and Edward, and Champ impaled her on the end of the mana sword. "Now, lets go find Alice." Champ said. ****************************8 Barry smiled at Alice across the table, the music playing was cheerful. He smoked a cigarette as they talked. "Alice, it's been too long." He said with a smile. Barry was thin, had long brown hair, and wore a black cloak. "No, it hasn't been long enough." Alice said. 'when did he get so confident?' She thought to herself. Barry had never been so overconfident, and she knew that this would be an advantage. Now she could change her plan, his overconfidence would be his demise. "Can you excuse me for a minute?" She said. "Certainly." Barry said. He turned his attention away for a moment, Alice took this as an opporotunity to lay a trap. Barry had left a box of cigarettes on the table, she replaced them with another pack, these cigarettes were laced with Nitroglyceryn(SP?). As she left a guest sat down to talk to Barry, he offered the newcomer a smoke. The man started to smoke it as he walked away, suddenly he burst into flames. Barry looked at Alice. "Clever." He said. "But, you do know what has to happen now, don't you?" Several beings with babylike heads and long arms appeared from the sides of the room, each held an assault rifle. They fired at Alice. None of their bullets ever hit their mark, they hit their owners. Alice stared, as Champ landed next to her. "How could you go to a party without me?" He said with a smile.
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Post by Champ on Jul 29, 2006 1:30:01 GMT -4
Chapter 17 Light Barry launched himself at Champ, they clashed blades, Barry grinned. He spun back and hung in the air, Champ chased after him. They exchanged blows, and Champ kept up, but Barry forced his arm back, and stabbed him through the shoulder. Champ reeled in pain, he couldn't do anything to stop Barry. "Well, before I put you through the most painful fate in history, I'm going to share with you some information about me." Barry said. "Not only am I in control of the dark side of the gateway organization, I also run this wonderful thing called the cancellation squad." "You are in charge of them!" Champ shouted, forgetting his pain for a minute. "That's right, you see, some worlds are too pathetic to let exist." He said. "So, I took control of these mindless beings, and went around destroying worlds I saw too weak, or too foolish and imperfect to be a part of my universe." "You ever heard of Adolf Hitler." Champ said weakly. "Because you sound alot like him." "Yes, well, he was a great man." Barry said. "He was a monster." Champ said. "Killing people because of race, religion or because they don't fit into YOUR world is intolerable." "Well, instead of arguing, I'm going to tell you how I'm going to ruin your existance." Barry said. "You have two options, you will either go into your dark form and kill Alice, or die. Now you have one option actually." He twisted the blade and Champ's eyes started to glow. "Your going to kill Alice, and then you will be my servant for eternity." Champ's eyes started to glow, thoughts of Alice streamed into his head. "NO!" He shouted. Their was a burst of light, Barry was thrown back. Champ hung in the air, his wound started to heal, the Mana sword dissolved, and reformed as a massive sword, designed for the protection of others. Champ himself was now clothed in a white cloak. Barry stared, then he lunged to attack Champ, they clashed blades, Barry fought with all he could, but his swords shattered, Champ cut a great X into him. Barry opened a portal. "This isn't over." He gasped as he went through. Champ smiled, he landed and embraced Alice. "I can't believe I didn't tell you that I was going to do this." Alice said. "It's okay." Champ said. "As long as your safe." She kissed him. The music started to play again, a slow song. "Can I have this dance?" Champ asked. "You used to say no whenever I asked you to dance." Alice smiled. "You used to say no when I asked you out." Champ said. Alice smiled. "Well, from now on lets both just say yes." Alice said. And they danced, forgetting their troubles, once again being able to be wrapped up in each others company. THE END A/n:Confused still? Well, that's because I left some loose ends for the sequels I'll be writing, but all of those additional villains (the woman in the robotboy chapter, Naraku) are members of the Dark side of the Gateway organization
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Post by Champ on Jul 29, 2006 2:58:52 GMT -4
whatcha think?
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Post by Zero on Jul 31, 2006 21:50:36 GMT -4
Flawless. Masterful story telling.
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Post by Machaeus on Aug 3, 2006 10:06:34 GMT -4
Very nice indeed.
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