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Post by Koith on Apr 25, 2011 8:56:08 GMT -4
This is the character that I've created a long time ago! Name: Koith KM-08 Age: 65 (Born in May, 9th, 1945) Gender: Male Image: Species: Robot Height: 173 cm Weight: 64 kilos Alignment: Good Abilities: Martial Arts, Guns Affiliation: Delta Force, Skyway Patrol, Global Robotic Defense Unit (G.R.D.U)+Rank: Captain +Class: Assault/Recon +Perks: -Extreme Conditioning -Stalker -Marksman +Weapons: M4A1/M14Bio: Koith KM-08 was born in 1945 as the project "Sieg" (means "Victory") in order to defeat the Allied during World War 2. Unfortunately, the Berlin had been taken earlier than everyone expected and the research facility had been bombed, burned all precious documents about Koith KM-08 (except him). Woke up between the debris, Koith had to fight with the Allied troopers and managed to escape that battlefield. From time, he travelled everywhere, joining many battles and always standed on the side of justice, even he was created by Nazi. After a long time of battling, Koith KM-08 finally landed on Tremorton but being chased by Jenny XJ9 (she thought he was a new enemy). Being outgunned, he was heavily damaged and captured by Jenn. At the Lab, Dr.Wakeman found Koith was that "Legendary Robot" (for participating many wars and mostly became hero). She used to restore the documents that being burned in the past and want to meet Koith KM-08 for research. Dr. said that Koith was the inspiration that led her to create Jenny XJ9, so he became Jenn's big bro... Abilities: Coming to Tremorton with the bare hands and the smarty head, Koith has no weapons and the Nazi scientists didn't have time to arm him (the facility was bombed too soon before Koith was launched to the battlefield). Fortunately, the Nazi didn't install the program that make Koith follow the Nazi Orders, so he can fight for justice and what he thinks right. Despite the weapon-less, Koith KM-08 is the master of Chinese martial arts and has the remarkable shooting skill (he born to be a soldier of course). Koith has a thruster at the bottom of his feet, so he can fly anywhere he want. His favorite weapons is Desert Eagle (Dr.Wakeman created for him a pair of laser one), LCK (Laser Combat Knife) and Assault Rifles (a true soldier, right?). Weakness: Koith was created as a hybrid robot. With the sharp intelligence, he won't let anyone reach his back easily. But, is he unarmed? Yes, that's his weakness! Because the lacking of personal weapons like the others, Koith can't protect himself only with fist, he need weapons too (that's why he had been shot down by Jenny in the first encounter). Personality: Coldheart outside, but warm inside. Spending time in battlefields, watching many deaths of teamates and comrades made Koith KM-08 became very responsible. He also loves nature and want to spend time for relaxing in the wilderness. He doesn't care about the normal life, but he always taking care of Jenny XJ9 as a replacement of Dr.Wakeman. At the first time, Jenn hated him a lot because she thought Koith is the big troublemaker of her life. But later, she was touched by the sacrifices that Koith spent for his little sister. Stats (Original)Strength: 6 Speed: 6 Defense: 6 Endurance: 7 Evasiveness: 7 Dexterity: 6 Intelligence: 20 Stats (Updated after being Jenny's bro) Strength: 11 Speed: 11 Defense: 11 Endurance: 12 Evasiveness: 12 Dexterity: 11 Intelligence: 20
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Post by Koith on Apr 27, 2011 9:55:21 GMT -4
Koith KM-08 (Part 2): Life, Appearance and Relationships+Life: Koith KM-08 lives very reserved. He spends most of his life-time for working as an assistant for Dr.Wakeman in her lab. He doesn't mind about being a normal adult (his appearance to be 21 years old). Koith's normal life is just shopping the listed goods, assisting his "Mom" and doing paper jobs. But, when someone ask for a mission, Koith will wait for it. He's a mercenary, but he just do works for justice (not just money and sometimes he won't mention it). In Skyway Patrol, Koith is the scout (who spot the enemy positions and support the teammates by sniper rifle). +Appearance: When Koith KM-08 being born, he was painted black and red as the Nazi main colors (blood and iron, right? ). After successfully escaped Berlin, for survival, Koith was repainted himself into blue and white. When being shot down by Jenny, the old paint he covered was exposed (that made Dr.Wakeman knew Koith is that "Legendary Robot"). Accepted Koith's request, Dr. repainted him once again. He looks like Brad in the outside, but his face always has an sorrowful angst. +Relationships: -XJ9: As a replacement of Dr.Wakeman, KM-08 is a secondary watcher for XJ9 and also a big bro too. He follows Jenn everywhere, watching and intercepting the wrong actions from his little sister. But, Koith won't interfere too much into Jenny's life because he already lived with it. When XJ9 in dangers, KM-08 will be there and fight to the death for his little sister. He doesn't care for his benefits, just sacrifice for Jenn. -Brad: Even Koith has some major differences with Brad, but they're still best friends. KM-08 also loves teasing Brad, that makes Koith relieve his stress after works. -Tuck: Like XJ9, Koith has a good care with Tuck like a true brother, sometimes that makes Brad jealous about it. -Dr.Wakeman: Mostly on the scientist-assistant relationship. Koith likes to work with "Mom" because he can study much more to do-it-himself in the future. But Dr.Wakeman sometimes doesn't know her "Son" too much and blame on him when Jenny was damaged (even Koith nearly dead to protect her). -Sheldon: Koith doesn't like Sheldon style too much, but KM-08 still plays with him. During the wandering time, Koith collected many comics including Sheldon's favorite ones. They're also care about Jenny, that's make them come together (PS: In the adult parody of MLAATR in Newgrounds, Koith sold the intels about Jenny for the golems )
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Post by Koith on Apr 28, 2011 10:17:42 GMT -4
Koith KM-08 (Part 3): Curiosities
Even I created Koith KM-08 nearly a Mary-Sue, but i'm still love him as my son. So I decided to make clearly about him. (Ryo Khoi is my author name, and I also created many other characters)
+Curiousities: +The real name of KM-08 is Koith "KM-08" Steiner (he was born by Dr. Alfred Steiner of the Nazi). Wakeman is the late surname when he came to live with XJ9 as the foster brother. +The name "Koith" based on the phrase "K" on his codename KM-08 in Germans. +Koith has a thick Germans accent. Sometimes, he will talk some German words when meeting something not too good. +Koith has a pair of condensed batteries as his main energy source. In the first time, these batteries contain fuel. But in the battle with Jenny, the batteries were overheated. To avoid the fire risk, Koith had thrown it and use the temporary energy cells (that can be used once). When coming to live with Jenn, Dr.Wakeman had replaced into hydrogen condensed batteries that safer and more stable than the old ones. +One of the main weaknesses from Koith is saying bad words. Sometimes, he'll say lots of bad words that also hurt the enemies' ears (the least hurt he can say is "Krap!!!"). +You should know that Koith KM-08 knows 5 main languages. Instead of 2 of them are fixed with him (Germans and English for interrogating the enemies and communicating), the 3 others are studied by himself (French, Russian and Japanese) from the time in battlefields. He also knows some minor languages all around the world. +One hobby and also the weakness of Koith is loves to read hentai manga. When in free time, he will take lots of those from his condensed collection and enjoy just for himself. Fortunately, he didn't gone bad about it.
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Post by Koith on Jun 21, 2011 5:29:17 GMT -4
Koith KM-08 (Part 4): Personalities
+Favorite food/drink: N/A +Favorite color: Blue +Favorite flower: Edelweiss +Favorite subject: Science (Include Chemistry, Physics, Mathematics) +Favorite sport: Baseball, Soccer +Favorite hobby: Read H+ Manga +Favorite pet: Dog +Favorite movie: Action +Girlfriend:...Marie TM-3... +Best friends:...My little sister, XJ-9 +Love: Assisting Dr. Wakeman, watching my little sis... +Hate: Arguing with Jenn, Literature +Favorite music: Rock
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Post by Agai Lazen on Jun 21, 2011 22:36:38 GMT -4
Do you have a picture, by any chance?
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Post by Koith on Jun 22, 2011 5:01:15 GMT -4
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Post by Koith on Jul 21, 2011 5:47:20 GMT -4
Koith KM-08 (Part 5): Project SiegProject "Sieg" (also called "Victory") is the top secret military project of the Nazi, in order to create powerful battle robots for defeating the Allied in World War 2. According to the remaining analysis of Hitler, these robots could also be used to deal with the Japanese and Italian when the Allied defeated to gain a total domination of the whole world. Begining of the project "Sieg" in the 1939. First, Nazi collected the children from all over the Reich and many provinces under their rule as the experimental subjects, this included Kane, son of Alfred Steiner-head scientist of this project. These kids were being focused at the top secret facility, being experimented for strength, obedience and willpower. Many of them died due to harsh experiments and diseases. Even Kane was found to be the best fit for the project, the others were still being transfered into other experiment camps for the other researchs. When the project officially commenced, Nazi brain surgeons took out Kane's brain as the main AI of the robot (with some modifications to fit with mechanical environment) instead of computer AI due to lack of modern technology. Second, Nazi started to transfer the brain into the robot's skull. Then, they assembly it to the remaining body that have been produced before. Third, Nazi started to arm that robot without experiments because of the urgents from battlefields. But, Berlin was lost, researching facility had been bombed. Project "Sieg" has been declared to be cancelled when Nazi surrendered the Allied. In 5 years, project "Sieg" passed 7 "Kriegmaschine-KM" prototype. But all of them were failed in the first experiment. When Kane was found to be perfectly fit for AI, it was in 1944. So, in order to defend Berlin with all cost, Nazi was forced to build the eighth version without experiment. And KM-08 had been born. One reason why the "KM-08" was lasted longer than expected because of the plot to kill Hitler in July, 20th, 1944. The project was temporarily suspended for investigation. When Stauffenberg and his comrades had been executed (including 178 scientists in the project), until October, 21th, 1944, the project'd been resumed. During that time, Alfred Steiner spent most of his time for research and reserved the full memory of Kane in the robot's AI. So Koith KM-08 still having nightmares and the flashbacks of Kane Steiner... Project "Sieg" still in the doctrines nowadays as Nora's documentaries about KM-08. But Koith found it when assisting her in the lab and he started suspecting himself about his past...
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Post by Champ on Jul 21, 2011 6:00:22 GMT -4
Okay, question aside from all of the other problems I have with this:Where did he get the name Koith? I mean, I know from the letter K, but why that name? Koith isn't even a proper name, I have never met anyone with it, and it's not even a common word, it's greek meaning a place of laying down, and it's actually usually meant to mean sexual intercourse. So why would he name himself that, and why would he pick that name before the countless other K names that would make more sense?
Also, why would Nora have a bunch of Nazi documents lying around? Weren't they destroyed with the facility? If they were restored, HOW?
Honestly, this whole profile needs a major overhaul.
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Post by Koith on Jul 21, 2011 9:53:36 GMT -4
Ah, that's name Koith is found by himself. When spelling KM-08, he spelled "Ko" instead of "Ka" in Germans. With your ideas, he can be "Kirt", "Ken", "Kevin",etc...
When calling KM-08, with my ideas is Kay-M-Eight (no Zero). If shortened, he can also name "Keith". But he want to get a special name that makes his foes remember when confronting him. So, KM-08 named himself based on his bad hobby of reading hentai-ecchi manga.
About the missing documents of Nazi. Nora found them accidentally from the one of the Allied veterans when she studying about KM-08 the "Legendary Robot", even it just a few remaining papers and many of them nearly burned into ash. With the hi-tech equipments, Nora managed to restore the mainframe documents about Project "Sieg". But, she still need a live KM-08 for research. So, that doctrines were in storage until Koith coming to Tremorton.
Well, glad you're here to share your opinions about Koith Steiner. I'll re-check it and edit the errors ASAP.
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Post by swoop on Jul 21, 2011 18:11:40 GMT -4
I suggest you start from scratch since your character is complete mess. I didn’t know you were serious of creating this character. A robot that was in 1940s should have his stats lowered severely due outdated engineering. A Japanese name for German robot made in the World War 2 that is like more 30 points in the Mary Sue chart right there. I suggest you take a week and think about this character. Take a Mary Sue Test.
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Post by Koith on Jul 22, 2011 0:58:13 GMT -4
Well, about the name "Koith". As Champ said, it was based on the Greek (in World War 2, Greece was being captured by Nazi until October, 12th, 1944). "Place of laying down" also mean house, hotel, etc. But when thinking about his bad hobby, he named it himself as Koith.
Reading ecchi-hentai doesn't lead KM-08 into a Japanese name. If it was real, it was just "Koi" means "love".
The new stats had been updated. Thanks for advising me about KM-08, my friends!
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Post by Koith on Jan 19, 2012 0:26:47 GMT -4
Here's the latest intels about Koith KM-08 (Rýo) Koith KM-08 (Part 6): Armory
+Favorite weapons: -Dual Desert Eagles -Laser Combat Knife (LCK) -Assault Rifles (Mostly M4A1, AK-47, ACR, SCAR-L)
+Temporary weapons (Due to operations): -M14 EBR -Berretta M9 -Shotguns (AA-12, Mossberg 500 Persuader, Benelli M4)
+Equipments: Base on the terrains and conditions he of the fields he steps in, but these things are always stick with him. -M9 Frag Grenades -Nine-bang Grenades (or Flashbangs) -C4s -Weapon Attachments (Mostly Red-dot Sights and Grenade Launchers, Silencers always) -Tactical Breaching Devices (in case he faces the reinforced gates/doors which kicking doesn't make senses) -Vision supports? No! He's a battle robot and just got updated by Nora so he's got a full support in his eyes (Night visions, Heat-sensors, Infrared-sensors)
+Stealth Weapons: Use for stealth missions or become a double-agent. -Hidden Blades: Attached inside his wrist (normally it just looks like a radiator-holes) -M9 Silenced -Suppressed Sniper Rifles (M99 Barrett, M14 EBR)
+New Weapons (Update after "Chrono Crisis" RP): -Hand-palm Minicannon: 65mm condensed cannon attached inside his left hand. Can use AP, HE and HEAT Shells which can penetrate through the Tiger II's armor about 1,5 metre. But, its ammunition is limited (8 rounds). -EMP Shotgun: Invented by Nora Wakeman after Koith came to live with her. Can easily disable the electronic matters with a single shot or cripple the specific part of the robot's body. In exchange, their physical damage is limited and less effective with organic enemies (can also be used as Taser).
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Post by Koith on May 23, 2012 10:56:59 GMT -4
Koith KM-08 (Part 7): Appearance in MODI'm now trying to make a MOD of Resident Evil 5 starring Koith and Jenny. But I find it very difficult to do, with a new ones from the other world. But, I keep trying to make it. Koith appeared in Mercenaries Reunion MOD with three costumes. "Reborn" Version Tactical SS Delta Force In the normal game, adds one costume. G.R.R.U (Global Robotic Response Unit - Art by XJ-0) Voice: Koith's voice is mildly deep with thick Germans accent. Examples: -Taunt: Fick! (hooking his middle finger toward enemies) -Asking help: +Nied a han'de her'e! +Jenny! (Only available when Duo with Jenny) -Command pickup: +Take it! +It's yours! -Command stance: +Attack: Go! (strong tone) +Cover: Come on!; Cover me! (serious tone) -Thanking: Danke!; Thanks, kamerad!; One point to you, zis! (Jenny only) -Dying: Ah...too...much! (serious and fading tone) -Worried: Coming! (strong and serious tone) -Checking: Careful next tai'm, Ok?; You'll be fine, Jen! (Jenny only) -Compliments: Gut job! (When chaining melee attacks or perfect headshots) Melee Attacks (Position: Attack - Power): +Head: Knock-out - 300 HP +Arm (Front): Cobra Tail - 600 HP +Arm (Back): Upside Down (Bent enemy's neck backward) - Instant Kill +Leg (Front): Mustang Sweep - 450 HP (ground the surrounding enemies) +Leg (Back): Tiger Tail - 500 HP +Grounded: Grinder (stomp and grind over the enemies) - 800 HP (Head Critical) +Grounded (with partners): Double Stomper - 900 HP x 2 +Combo Finisher (Front): Double Kick - 1000 HP x 2 +Combo Finisher (Back): Rhino Charge - Instant Kill (Only against sub-bosses and Metazens - Normal enemies robot) +Grapple Breaker: Brain Freezer (Kick from the high toward rear head) - 800 HP (Can kill Phase 1 Metazens with one hit). +Stunned Kane: Bone Breaker, Pivot Kick, Leg Hooker, Knee Strike, Uppercut, Cobra Strike - 2500 HP +Dazed Kane: Cartwheeler - 400 HP x 2 +Special Ability: Blitz Dash (Just stolen from Wesker ;D)
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Post by Koith on Jun 14, 2012 4:58:41 GMT -4
Koith KM-08 (Part 8): Fun facts(Koith's Natal chart)-Koith's favorite tobacco products is Prinz and Luftwaffe which imported from his home-nation Germany. His favorite guns also include G36 series, MP5, SIG SG552. He'd known for his thick Deutsch accent and very nationalist. -Koith's uniform is designed based on the Amazons. In ancient traditions, to help more convenient in archery, those women warriors cut off one of their breast as the same position of their main-hand (EX: If that warrior left-handed, she will cut off her left one). Koith also the left-handed soldier so he got this uniform to get more convenient in combat (it's a nightmare if you put your ammo right inside the pockets near your gun-holding hand between the raging battlefield. -Surprisingly, Koith's favorite book is Mein Kampf even he hated Hitler with a passion. -When choosing the style to follow, Rýo (Koith's author) had to decide between two ways for Koith KM-08: Neon-Juma's style or shadow2007x's on devArt. After many days, he decided to choose shadow2007x. Here's the reasons why: +Koith's hidden personality is somewhat pervert that he's always try to peeking his sister Jenny's body when she has a chance to get naked. Here's the comparisons between the two artists: Juma Shadow2007x =>And for the sake of Jenny, Rýo got a first reason for this. +Also for sake of Jenny's other sisters too: XJ-8 as sample for Juma Jenny's Mom and sisters by shadow2007x +Conclusion: If follow Neon-Juma's style, Koith could be the luckiest Nazi bastard who got a whole harem within his sisters, and Rýo really, really hates that (because...he's got no chicks *shocked*)
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Post by Koith on Aug 28, 2012 6:24:07 GMT -4
Koith KM-08 (Part 9): High School Like Jenny, Koith also attends to Tremorton High even he appears to be 21 years old. The only cause that led him into this just because KM-08 wants to stick with his little sister as the secondary watcher for Dr. Wakeman.
Surprisingly, even with the advanced A.I and pretty shrewd, Koith's performance in study not so good at all. According to the report cards, Koith's high-grades are focus in these subjects:
-Mathematics (Both Algebra and Geometry) -Physics -Chemistry -Geology -P.E (Physical Education)
But, he got no exceptions. Koith extremely bad at these things:
-Biology (Koith got no ideas about living organisms, even he mastered Warfare First Aid) -Literature (Always got F's for every tests) -History (Who care? He's not American, of course!) -English (Due to speaking English not so good when he gets upset, so does using informal words/grammars) -C.E (Civic Education; Because his orientation toward the former Nazi with the quote: "Ein Volk, Ein Reich, Ein Fuhrer", related to the Literature, too!)
In sport, Koith's good at soccer and baseball. With the sharp wit, swift and high cooperation, he's the star of the team in every matches against the visitors (Of course he must make sure that no technical supports from his gadgets). His favorite positions are Striker and Wing Midfielder in soccer; Midfielder and Pitcher in baseball.
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