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Post by Agai Lazen on Feb 29, 2012 23:44:28 GMT -4
So beautiful... The gynoid "kissing" Agai here is Shasta Podvodnya, a joint creation of me and a good friend of mine that goes by the name Igor Kutuzov. At first she was just another model off of the Kutuzov Heavy Industries (KHI) factory line, but through some coincidental events she and Agai become strongly attached to each other. Over the course of several villain @$$-whoopin's, they start to notice they've fallen in love. Shasta herself is actually still in development. She hasn't been given very much to do other than what Agai does, and that doesn't define her from him very much. Her visual design was also over much debate, ranging from her factory-fresh chassis... To an aqua-lancer...thing design... To a design more evocative of Bubblegum Crisis, which we agreed on when I drew the top image. Let's see...ah, parameters. Height: 6' Weight: 180 lbs Special Equipment:high-capacity internal generator (maximum output:1000 kw) Maser Combustion Drive (manipulates pure photons into any shape for any purpose) Combo Hardpoint (not visible here, can combine with specialized units to increase parameters) Genesis Drive (able to reproduce with a male partner if the drive is active, has no control over when the drive becomes active) Triphibian Drive (can operate in high altitude, space, underwater, and underground. Activates a propulsion system mounted in feet when needed.) Knuckle Crusher (armor plate that slides over knuckles when punching, can spike outward to gash at opponents or combined with the Maser Combustion Drive for a status effect; stun, burn, etc.) Skills: Fast reflexes, strong armor equipped, can repair damaged machinery, can seduce robots normally immune to seduction, fast and precise aim.
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Post by Koith on Mar 2, 2012 1:33:22 GMT -4
The last time I'd been here, I was never be serious talking about my OC, right? Now here's the full details of my only son. Koith KM-08 (Yeah, I know! Pretty bad pictures, right?) As what I posted in Wakeman's Lab, he was born by the Nazi to become the most powerful weapon that can bring Das Reich into total domination. But, he was lucky for not being a puppet under Nazi's hand after the research facility bombed. Koith's story before coming to live with Jenny is the big question. But, due to some documents, he used to serve in Vietnam from Indochina War to Sino-Vietnamese War and this is the country he serve for the longest time. Heroic life, but sorrowful... I won't mention about the skills and his ordinary life anymore, it already in Wakeman's Lab and his recovered doctrines are Nora's top-secrets. But if someone want a fresh Playboy or little tricks to get money, just meet him. I'll post Marie TM-03 as Koith's lover and her big brother Tony TM-01 right after I finished the latest episode of "The Last Soldier" (Koith and Jenny Rule!)
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Post by swoop on Apr 5, 2012 16:44:28 GMT -4
I was working on the character called android-lina. She was based on small time character named Amelia from Terry Goodkinds Soul of Fire. I have to ask fan characters that are reference to tabooed stories are allowed. I took out the rape part since my skills are not good enough to write raped character, it is suppose to be minor character for teenage robot, and my story is more kid friendly. Android-Lina will be far different from Amilia. I am not going to tell spoilers from either of them My only reveal is this character is that she is cyborg the she lives in the planet cluster. She communicates with vexus and tells how her daughter Vega is doing and the planet Cluster. She is just an operator that can do magic and has a dark past that is all for now
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Post by swoop on Nov 16, 2012 0:23:02 GMT -4
I got an idea after watching a video. One thing that got my attention is the stat point system. This may sound like busy work but it help make progress and to show developing. Let say your character is has an average of a five. You would have two others sets of stats the rp stats what you during the role play and fan fic stats the point you gain from your stories. When we are playing with alternate reality version then put it under a subfile. I also like few more things to put under stats, Charm and Intimidate. I would like to put methods. Such as: psychic, physical, magic, ecto (ghost), gadget. I did not have it fully thought out yet
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Post by Jakob on Nov 19, 2012 2:09:26 GMT -4
Jakob started as a Sonic fan character. His very first iteration was this ugly thing that could've been called a recolour of recolours of recolours of more original bat-based Sonic OCs. I made him because I rather like robots.
However, the only thing I've ever retained in his original design were the large ears- which I've even now scrapped due to my preference to have his visuals speak for his personality- namely that he values efficiency, and horrible wind-catching redundant ears are the opposite of efficient.
Now he looks nothing like his original iteration. In fact, even his personality is a lot different compared to his older variants.
Whenever I take an interest in making a quick Sonic-based fanfic, I roll with Jakob's replacement: a robot named Stylus- an assassin sent far beyond the reaches of Dr. Robotnik's most powerful sensors to take out problem targets- a robot who- despite managing to retain free will- is still fiercely loyal to the doctor.
... Okay, his only fic I've written (but never finished because the climax I originally wrote was boring and contrived) was his being sent on an assignment that took him over seventy years to complete. By the time he returned, Robotropolis was gone. Nothing familiar was left, and in its place, a city full of tall bipedal things. To make matters worse, the years had started to catch up to him on his system- which has really started to deteriorate, causing much data loss.
But enough about that dude.
I've put Jakob in a ton of things in the past- as his being an unusually sophisticated robot often excuses his presence in scenarios, but now he's kind of fallen off his throne as my most developed character.
Perhaps this is because I've been branching out my interests.
KPG on the other hand... he's truly at the mountains of madness, and he has no plans to turn away.
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Post by Koith on Nov 21, 2012 5:34:56 GMT -4
Tony TM-1 and Marie TM-3 started as Japanese ninja-robots when I was watching MLaaTR (Koith appeared as my main OCs pretty long ago), their father is the mad Hi-Tech scientist who aims to destroy Koith and Jenny to reclaim the title Guardian of Tremorton from Nora and her children (that guy used to be Nora's friend in the young age). But, after a long time later, I decided to change their nationality into France cause I'm interested with the acts of French's government as the defiance against US' rising influence through NATO and ERP, also make a stand for the future EU.
But, the progress for completion never be easy. Since I'm working more to make clear about Koith's identity, I'm also work on the biography of TMs' series and also Dr. Linguine Le Blanc, their father.
I have no plan writing the revelations about them, but they will appear in season 2 of The Last Soldier.
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Post by wolfgal22 on Mar 23, 2013 13:21:14 GMT -4
i have an OC my self her name is wolfgal the mightyena wolf my OC its fur it black and light blue so ya i have an OC
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Post by Plink on Mar 25, 2013 4:27:37 GMT -4
Plink originally started off as a "private" OC when I first saw MLAATR. Generally, I liked the show and can remember myself thinking about the OC's interaction with the MLAATR universe during the few episodes I have seen (such as I was a pre-school dropout).
Plink eventually came to "inspire" a character I use for an original fiction series of books Being co-written by two of my friends. However, the character from the book series has drastically changed over the years to become unrecognizable and therefore unrelated to Plink.
Plink's Antennae/radar dish was inspired by a robot seen in an "I Spy" book that similarly has a radar dish glued to its head. This has been since it's first incarnation.
Alice is a character that has been created within the point of registry on this forum. She is supposed to be a female complimentary to Plink (keep things balanced here).
The name Alice was used because of "Alice in Wonderland" (In general. Not a specific movie). Alice utilizes a single rocket "ponytail" for aerial propulsion whereas Plink utilizes anti-gravitational repulsers. Because of the antigravity repulsion, Plink can move at excruciatingly fast speeds through the air.
Both Plink and Alice are "nerds" In that they are interested into science fiction and fantasy. Both are equally conservative and moral (Christianity based morality) due in part to their own decisional programming and to their upbringing to Christian parents.. This is very likely to last them throughout their lives.
Alice was created in remembrance to the now deceased daughter of Melissa "Moxie" Jane. This Idea was taken from a previous post I stumbled on in the forums by a (supposed) inactive member (theorizing that Wakeman's reason for building the XJ's was due to the deaths of her physical daughters).
Plink, on another note, was created with the sole purpose of recreating the human psych and interactive ability. This Idea has been a general constant, also used by many other AI OC's not created for the MLAATR universe.
Both Alice and Plink are equipped with Near Wakeman grade weaponry. This means similar amount of damage dealt with by XJ9 should be equally dealt from AG1 and JP12 (Plink and Alice Model Numbers).
JP12 does not currently indicate Plink as the Twelfth installment of the JP series. However, It can be safely assumed, for continuity reasons, That Plink is a 12th version of the JP robotics model. AG and JP are the initials of the first and middle names of both OC's (Alice Grace and John Percival).
Plink and Alice have been modeled out as 3D models. However, more 2D drawings of the two may be created in the future.
And That should be it as far as a really long and *cough* technical *cough* list goes. Hope I don't cause people to have their eyes shrink from the size of the impending text wall. :evilgrin:
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Post by Koith on Jul 1, 2013 9:53:35 GMT -4
This is what I made Koith into the RP version. I recently in the busy translating the another work into English. So if I have time for "The Last Soldier", I'll send it to you guys in no time.
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Post by swoop on Nov 24, 2013 12:53:24 GMT -4
Thinking about it most my fan characters are references. This may mean I am lazy but I have been thinking what is easy and simple does not mean I can twist it to something else. I also put in mind that most are at this point side-characters at this time. They have yet to do much acknowledgement to get more spotlight at this time and I do not want them stealing from other characters especially the character the people wanted to see.
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Post by swoop on Nov 27, 2013 19:38:35 GMT -4
I think we should talk the difference from fan character to original characters. I think there is some confusion.
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Post by swoop on Jan 29, 2014 16:55:20 GMT -4
No one bother to say it. I feel you all sheepish. You can make a good fan character and you can make a good original character. fan character it is not insult. Your character is connected to the show that means he/she/xe must blend. You have to make it believable that this character would exist in that universe. Not your universe their universe.
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