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Post by Champ on Mar 5, 2006 17:36:45 GMT -4
alright, first i am here to report i have a final list of RP chars i will use..Champ,Sango,Riza,Ed,and my new one... note that i have vastly changed this charachter's history
this reminds me alot of when Isa used her future daughter, except where hers was annoying an energetic, mine is cold and sarcastic. so without further ado i bring you "DAUGHTER"
Champ couldn't sleep, his head was pounding and he knew why, but it didn't make sense. It was a signal, but it was one that could only be sent by one of his bloodline. And Champ knew full well he had no bloodline left. Finnally he couldn't stand it anymore, he got up and walked out. There was no navigating neccesary,the signal would show him the way. He came across a research facility, and quickly he crawled through the airduct, finally the signal peaked, he went down into an empty room. The room was full of big glass containers, large enough to store a person, which is exactly what they were doing. He turned around, sensing the person he was looking for, and gasped. In the case was a young girl, no older than 11 or 12, with long platinum hair that was up in pigtails. She looked nothing like Champ, but something about the girl reminded Champ of himself. And somehow, without knowing how he knew it, he knew the girl's name. "Ruri." The chamber hissed, and the door slid open, the girl yawned and stepped into the open air. "oh, hi dad, i was wondering when you'd get here." She said, as if she had been left behind from school or something, not in a glass tube. Champ knew what was going on, and in a sense, he realized, this girl was in fact his daughter... Sango saw Champ walking back and ran to meet him, then froze, beside him was a little girl, and she was talking to him. There was something odd about the girl, but Sango took little notice. "hey Champ!" she said. "who's the kid?" Champ looked at Ruri and said with a long sigh. "this is Ruri, my daughter...." end part 1
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Post by Champ on Mar 5, 2006 17:55:13 GMT -4
Part 2 "excuse me..." said Sango. "your DAUGHTER!" the sense of betrayal she felt was immense, and this was just really weird in general. "genetically."explained Ruri, it seemed redundant but then she clarified" I'm genetically modified from a sample of his DNA that skyway patrol had." "than your not technically his daughter." Sango said. "oh no, i am his daughter, most of my DNA is his, the only way we differ is, as you've no doubt noticed, our differences in appearance." "so" said Sango, now looking at Champ. "what are you gonna' do with her?" "what do you think?" Said Champ. "I'm gonna' take care of her." ****************** It was hopeless, Champ could barely take care of himself, throwing in a little girl for him to care for was madness. Still he gave it a valiant effort, although Ruri was less than exhilarated to be cared for by this idiot. Champ wished Isabella was around to help him out, because she had gone through this before. Still Ruri contented herself in ignoring her dad and playing video games, she enjoyed the free time but it would not last long... Eventually Champ had to talk to Ruri, or at least figure some things out. "Ruri, you do understand that you have REAL parents don't you." the girl looked down, she obviously didn't like this line of conversation. "i mean, you at least have a real mom, their probably looking for you, it's better than staying here with me, and I'm pretty sure you have still got real.."he continued. "i know!" she shouted. Then she froze up, and started crying. "I've met my parents, their good people but...i dunno i just can't fit in with them."She said. "that's why i sent out the signal, your my dad amd your closer to me than my parents, even if that wasn't your DNA you'd be closer to me than my parents, than ANYONE." "why is that?" Champ asked, he had a feeling this was important. "they wouldn't tell me what they were training me for." she said. "i couldn't know my purpose, i know your story, you broke out. I couldn't do that. Heck, i probably would have asked you to adopt me if you weren't at least genetically speaking related to me. your my dad in a small sense, and I'm the daughter you wished had never existed." He hugged her. "well, I'm happy to know you exist, although the way you put it your more of my sister..." "no." she said. "my egg was artificially inseminated(SP?),since it was a military experiment, and my dad isn't in the military...this was before my parents were married, or had even met, they used whatever they thought would work best, that was you by incident." Champ was in shock, he was Ruri's REAL father. "you always wondered why the military health tests were so extensive." she said. That was true, easy to access info. In fact Champ had been quoted on it and it was the army's little joke. "see, you are my dad." Ruri said. Champ tried to process all of this. "well, it's getting late, you should probably go to sleep." he said. She walked to the Spare bedroom Champ never used and was asleep in half an hour. Now he had time to think.
yeah it's weird, but i needed to modify Ruri's back story and i needed a big loophole, and i found one. PLZ review, and the story will hopefully get less serious soon
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Post by Champ on Mar 6, 2006 18:33:55 GMT -4
i just saw the episode of Nadesico where Ruri meets her real parents and my loophole got bigger, despite her parents claiming they have solid proof Ruri is their daughter, they haven't run a DNA scan, also the man in the facility where she grew up sad that she was one of a group of unidentifiable eggs, anyway heres part 3
"NO!" Ruri shouted. "Ruri, come on." Champ persisted. "I am not going to school" she shouted. "RURI!"Champ bellowed. The girl stopped. "listen, i had a talk with skyway patrol this morning and i'm allowed to take care of you but one of the conditions is that you have to go to school." "I guess it's worth it." she said. ******************************* When Ruri walked in she was absolutely furious. "Ruri, what's..." Champ asked. "i hate school!" she shouted. "I HATE SCHOOL!!! I HATE THE PEOPLE, I HATE THE TEACHERS, I HATE SKYWAY PATROL FOR MAKING ME DO THIS!!!!" She slammed the door to her room and a short while later Champ heard her crying. He jokingly thought 'does she do anything other than cry?' but Champ couldn't blame her, her life had been miserable up until now and school children have no pity. Champ walked in and sat next to Ruri. "what happened?" he asked. "everyone made fun of me, even the teacher, the only person who didn't was a boy named Tuck." she said. "that's tuck for you, but what's this about the teacher making fun of you?" Champ asked. "she called me a freak, said i wasn't normal. and everyone just laughed at me all day." she said. "i went through the same thing, and i'd love to say it gets easier but it doesn't, Ruri, the only way to get people to stop making fun of you is to make them" he said. Ruri looked at him. he gave her a hug and left the room, she still needed to release some frustration he thought. Ruri was quiet the rest of the night. **************************************************** The next day Ruri was waiting outside of the high school for Champ, this flashed warning signs already since she wasn't supposed to be out of school for another half hour. Champ ran over, there was a bruise one Ruri's cheek and she held a letter. She had been suspended for 2 days, she had gotten in a fight. Ruri had expected Champ to be mad at her, and he was obviously dissapointed, but not angry. "this wasn't what i meant when i told you to make them stop making fun of you." he said."but it'll get the job done." Ruri was amazed, she knew that most people wouldn't understand who had made the mistake, yet Champ had realized that it was his fault for giving Ruri the wrong idea. and for that Ruri gained a little more respect for her father.
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Post by Champ on Mar 6, 2006 23:06:02 GMT -4
When Champ was about to leave for school he gave Ruri a large packet. "this should keep you occupied." he said. She looked through it, the questions seemed very easy but the sheer numbers made them take several hours, but Ruri was amazed at the speed she finsihed them in. She found her self with a few hours before Champ would get home so she started to watch TV, and she came to realize what so many others did, daytime TV sucks. So she grabbed a book and started reading, she became so occupied that she didn't notice when Champ came in and grabbed the test, she also didn't realize his stunned reaction to the results the computer gave him. She finished the book at dinner time and she had no sooner sat down than she asked "dad, what was that test you had me take?" "that was the SAT Ruri, i wanted to find out how smart you are since you were obviously above average."He said. "what did i score?" she asked. "1601." Champ said. "but, dad, you can't score 1601 on the SAT." "i know." *********************
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Post by Champ on Mar 7, 2006 20:01:08 GMT -4
As soon as Champ reached the apartment building he had a sickening feeling in his stomach, the door to his apartment was flung open. He called skyway patrol. "i'm sorry sir." said a lieutenant. "your daughter has not been taken by skyway patrol, we would have sent a request, we at Tremorton base Alpha are not..." "i don't care! is there anyone there who may be interested in Ruri?" Champ asked. "her mother, Lisa Hoshino." The lieutenant responded. "where does she live?" the boy gave him an adress and he took off across town. Champ shattered the door to the apartment and was relieved to see Ruri. "thank god, i was..." Champ started but a woman stood behind Ruri, pointing a gun at him. "don't take another step." she said. "Ruri is my daughter." "she is my daughter too, she came to me." Champ said. "well now shes with me." she said. "not by choice." said Ruri. "Ruri, you don't know who this man is." the woman said. "he's Champ Mars, he's my father." Ruri said. "Ruri, you don't want to stay with this man, you don't love him." the woman babbled. "lets find out." Champ said. "Ruri, pick who you want to stay with." The woman refused to let go of Ruri. "it's not a choice if you force her to pick." said Champ. The woman let go, Ruri ran over to Champ. "Ruri, i love you." said the woman, yet she didn't seem natural. "no you don't mother." said Ruri."you love Skyway patrol, if i stayed with you i'd go back to skyway and they'd do more experiments on me." "Ruri, it's for your own good." the woman said. "if you really loved me you'd know what they were doing was wrong." Ruri said. "Ruri, i love you, i really do." the woman cried. "if you loved me you wouldn't have to tell me, i never want to see you again." Ruri said with finality. Champ turned to leave but suddenly there was a bang and something passed through Champ's shoulder and everything went dark.... Champ woke up looking up at Ruri. "what happened?" he asked. "my mom shot you." Ruri said. "then what?" he asked. "skyway showed up almost as soon as you blacked out, they figured out what was going on pretty quick." she said. "what happened to your mom?" champ asked. "she tried to fight skyway and they killed her." Ruri said. "how long have i been unconsious?" he asked. "26 hours." said Ruri. "but just because of the anisthetic." "how long have you been here?" he asked. "26 hours, either outside the operating room or right here." Ruri said. Champ hugged the girl, and as soon as she closed her eyes she fell asleep.
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Post by Champ on Mar 7, 2006 23:48:13 GMT -4
the diary of Ruri Hoshino-Mars: i have no idea why i'm writing in this, i still view diaries as really, really stupid. Still i guess it could help me get some things off my chest. First and foremost, i still don't trust skyway. As far as i see it kiling my mom was just covering their tracks. They are trying to have the public regain trust after several recent incidents. I must say that this has been the best week of my life. I love my father and despite some rough patches, we are completely able to get along. We can handle each other, now the question is, can everyone else? ******************************************************* The end
PLZ COMMENT!!!!
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Post by nwakeman on Mar 9, 2006 18:19:27 GMT -4
Very nice.
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Post by Champ on Mar 9, 2006 18:20:40 GMT -4
i worked very hard so thanks for reading, if only 'cause i bugged you to death
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