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Post by FB-06: Shinozuka Mari on Feb 15, 2011 9:31:01 GMT -4
Ok, I have an OC, he's still in development, but I have the basic idea of what he is. Truth be told, the idea came to me while I was listening to "The Warrior's Code" by the Dropkick Murphys.
My OC's a robot, a sparing robot to be precise, from Dublin, Ireland; he found his way into the hands of one of Dr. Noreen Wakeman's former students after being replaced by a superior model. The robot was rebuilt to serve as a defense droid in response to the increase in alien attacks. Unlike the XJ Series, the robot isn't armed with a plethora of weapons and gadgets; instead, he's armed with the skills of the boxing greats, from Muhammad Ali to Mike Tyson and everyone in between.
Due to the lack of gadgets (except for a propulsion system based on the XJ Series) there's more room for high powered servos, pistons, pumps, and artificial muscle tissue, thus making my robot OC stronger than even 10 XJ-8s combined! On top of that, my OC has a special device (I've yet to decide on a name) that makes my OC a force to be reckon with! When the device is activated my OC's speed increase so much that by the time the enemy feels the first punch the second punch has already connected, the third punch is a quarter of the way there, the fourth punch is around half way there, and the fifth punch is winding up; on top of that, the gadget actually creates "shadows" of the user (basically solid holograms of the user). For the coup de grĂ¢ce the shadows combine with the user, increasing the user's mass to astronomical levels, thus increasing the power of the smashing uppercut (and I mean a smashing, kōgōshii (awe inspiring) uppercut!)
I'll update this as soon as I develop the character more, and I'll add more OCs as I develop them.
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Post by FB-06: Shinozuka Mari on Feb 15, 2011 22:29:16 GMT -4
Okay, I'm not updating my character yet, but I am adding some more OC ideas here; specifically, it's the Cluster royal family.
We all know about Vexus and Vega, but what about Vexus' parents? And is Vega truly the only child, or are there others? Here's the idea:
The previous rulers of Cluster Prime were Vera and Malforak, the mother and father of Vexus. They're marriage was arranged when they were just kids, and they weren't exactly the perfect couple, but Vera always tried to make it work out for the sake of her empire, and they were both happy and faithful to each other...at least until Vexus was born.
The first seeds of antagony were sowed when the King and Queen bickered over how the other was raising Vexus; Vera thought that Malforak was raising Vexus to be a power hungry tyrant, and Malforak thought Vera was raising Vexus to be a complete pushover. Despite the constant arguing, Vera was convinced that, for the good of the empire, and for its heir, she had to make it work. Eventually Malforak's faithfulness started to take a dive; it started with playful flirting with the female servants, but eventually the flirting turned into hugging and kissing, and soon into seduction and infidelity, and it expanded from servants to any girl with a pretty face and a shapely figure; despite this, Vera was still convinced that, for the good of the empire, and for its heir, she had to make the marriage work.
Eventually, Malforak started to become a very powerful but very bad influence to Vexus; slowly, but surely, Vexus changed from an innocent little girl (yes, even Vexus was a sweet little girl at one time) and into a spoiled and lustful brat who spent most of her time...uh...getting...uh...getting her parts...uh...lubricated... On top of that, she started to disrespect her mother more and more, and listening to her father much more attentively; about this time, Vexus stopped sneaking out of the palace for "intimate lubrication" as often, which wouldn't have been too suspicious if it wasn't for the fact that Malforak was sneaking out less too. Okay, here's where things get real juicy!
One night Vera was walking around the royal palace when she heard some rather suggestive noise coming from Vexus' room. At first Vera thought her daughter had the audacity to bring a boy to the palace for a little romp, but the truth was much worse; when Vera approached her daughter's room, she heard two -not one, but two- familiar voices. When the queen peeked into Vexus' room, her fears were confirmed; the boy in question was none other than Malforak! Despite her shock, shame, and disgust, and despite the fact that she just knew she has forever lost her daughter, she had to make the marriage work for the good of the empire.
As time passed, the inevitable happen; Vexus was pregnant, and her father was the father of the child! It wouldn't have been so bad for Vera if she was ignorant of her husbands incestuous affairs with their own daughter, and if wouldn't have been so bad if she didn't constantly overhear Malforak comparing her with Vexus, and if Vexus wasn't so proud of the whole sordid affair. again, Vera was convinced that, for the good of the empire, and its sole heir, she had to make everything work out...that was until her husband and daughter told Vera, to her face no less, that Vexus future child would be heir to the throne; that was the straw that broke the camel's back!
After taking crap for nearly two centuries, Vera finally had it; she refused to be the matriarch of such a depraved family, and she wanted to punish her treacherous husband and her slut of a daughter. The next day, Vera stepped down and proclaimed (albeit with deep regret) Vexus as the new queen of Cluster Prime, but not before making one final proclamation (one which, according to Cluster tradition, the citizens of the empire are duty bound to honor) which included the following commands:
1) The marriage of Vera and Malforak was to be annulled, effective immediately.
2) Malforak was to be dethroned, stripped of all rank and privilege, and cast out of the Cluster royal family, effective immediately.
3) Malforak was to be forever banished from Cluster Prime and its territories, effective immediately.
Needless to say, Vexus was quite unhappy with her mother's decision and decided to confront her after her proclamation. I'd tell you what they said to each other, but the board kinda frowns on foul language; what I can tell you is that Vera told Vexus that if Vexus and Malforak's child was decreed the heir to the throne, Vera would reveal to Cluster Prime and its territories the identity of the father, and, according to Cluster Prime law (which Vexus neglected to study), and I quote, "If a member of the Cluster royal family bears a child from a bond of incest, then the accused will be stripped of all rank and privilege, cast out of the Cluster royal family, and the subject and his or her decendants would be forever more banished from the Cluster Empire."
In the end, Vexus was forced to give up her children in order to remain queen; and for this, Vexus would never forgive her mother, who left Cluster Prime soon after descending from the throne.
The children in question were twins, a boy (Altorak) and a girl (Altria).
Again, I'll expand on the OCs when I develop them; but at least now you have a basic understand of the angst and bitterness and hatred amongst the royal family of Cluster Prime in my MLaaTR universe.
EDIT: I've decided against using these new OCs in my current fanfic project, but I'll keep them and use them for something else.
Also, Skyway Patrol, please don't ban me for the suggestiveness here; it's not like and went and said what this was about in excruciating detail.
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Post by swoop on Feb 16, 2011 2:04:59 GMT -4
It is best to do one character at a time for each thread, also try a Mary Sue Test for your character to see if it works.
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