Post by Material Defender on Jul 8, 2005 14:48:58 GMT -4
This is something I've been writing. I've got 5 chapters done. Sometimes they will meet people you should know, other times it will be charaters of my own creation.
Chapter 1: The Arrival
On a completely average day, in a completely average clearing in an average forest, opened an incredibly odd portal that three strange looking things stepped from.
One was 8 ft, completely covered in metal except for a hood that held blackness and was stayed in a shape as if a human head was there. His metal was gray and bloodstained and his hood was gray as well. He had a Red cape, with gray spots with red-orange energy strands protruding from his back. He carried a giant sword and a big book with him.
Another was 5 ft 2 in, wearing a black cloak and wearing a wrapped covering over her body and pelvic areas. It also was on part her right leg and arm. She had completely red eyes, had skin that was black as darkness itself, and deep purple hair. She was human in form except for her height. She carried twin daggers on her side.
Another was 7 ft 5 who was bright red skinned, heavily muscled, and had humanoid form. He wore armor all around his body except for his head, which was exposed. The armor was black and gold with some bloodstains on it as well as some spikes to protect some areas from attack. He had 4 yellow eyes (One pair for day vision, other for night vision) with white rims around them, and had dirty gray hair. He carried a claymore on his back, in between his two red wings.
The portal closes quickly once they come threw. The girl looks around at the trees and plants. “Well its certainly greener then home,” She commented, in her somewhat high pitched girly voice.
“We are on a mortal planet, of course it’s greener,” The metal on said, in his ethereal male voice, ”Did you except it to look like home?”
“No. I’m kind of hungry. Hmmm, I think I’ll try that,” She said, approaching a bush. She tore off a leaf and ate it. “Better then the plants back home. Or is that an animal?” She asked after eating it.
“Don’t know. I’ll check my book,” the metal one said. He pulled out his book and said “Query: Green short leafy thing on a mortal planet.” The book flipped to a page that read as follows: Normally described as a bush, can have berries growing on it. Normally a plant, would retaliate if otherwise. “It’s a plant,” The metal one replied.
“Then I won’t touch it. I hate plants,” the red one said, in a deep voice, while pointing to his sharp teeth, obviously making him a carnivore.
“Ok, enough screwing around, we need to go. Tra’Dor stop eating the bushes,” She stopped,” Kron’Die, you can hunt dinner later, its time we go greet the warriors we are to be working with here,” The metal one said.
“I’m hungry though,” The winged one, named Kron’Die, replied.
“This is supposed to be a reasonably advanced place, I’ll get you a steak some where,” The metal one said back.
“What kind of steak, Ir’Cru, Ir’Doe?” Kron asked back.
“Cow,” The metal one answered after looking in his book.
“What’s a cow?” Kron asked.
“A fat slow creature breed for milk and food,” the metal one said in return.
“So God gave us hell and he gave whoever lives here cows. DAMN HIM!” Kron yelled.
“I doubt you can get God to go to hell,” Tra’Dor, the ebony girl, answered,” So, Annoron, any idea where here is.”
Annoron, the metal one, answered,” Hmm, well I believe it is called Earth. Although it has many mighty warrior\protectors on its surface, but without help they are no match against Hera and her armies. That’s why I was sent, and I picked you two to assist me.”
“You don’t need to remind us. Just hearing her name makes me shudder,” Kron said back.
“Here, Hera, Hera,” Tra repeated many times, annoying Kron. He gave her a good smack across the back of her head.
“You would do well to fear her as well,” Kron said, knowing she knew nothing of Hera.
“Why, she’s just some Kron’tada. I don’t care if she’s supposed to be the super-powerful queen figure, all you have to do is slither up their backsides and slit their throats,” Tra said,” Just because you two don’t know how isn’t my problem.”
“It will not be that easy to kill her. Anyways it is time we got a flyer’s eye view on this area. Tra, you can get on my back,” Annoron said.
“Ok,” She said, climbing up onto his back and clenching the far side of his shoulder plate. Kron and Annoron took off.
At the end of each chapter I will give meanings to any words that are unclear and state what language it is from.
Demon Words:
Kron: Means Destroyer or Slayer
Die: Means one who is such, basically Kron’Die means one who is a Slayer or Destroyer.
Tada: Means Lord or King of. Kron’ Tada means King of Destroyers or Slayers.
Tra: Means thief.
Dor: Means resourceful. Tra’Dor basically means Resourceful Thief.
Ir: Means small or feeble. Also used to refer to children.
Cru: Means fire breather. Ir’Cru is a baby dragon.
Doe: Means fire controller. Ir’Doe means imp.
I'll post the others after I get some response to this.
Chapter 1: The Arrival
On a completely average day, in a completely average clearing in an average forest, opened an incredibly odd portal that three strange looking things stepped from.
One was 8 ft, completely covered in metal except for a hood that held blackness and was stayed in a shape as if a human head was there. His metal was gray and bloodstained and his hood was gray as well. He had a Red cape, with gray spots with red-orange energy strands protruding from his back. He carried a giant sword and a big book with him.
Another was 5 ft 2 in, wearing a black cloak and wearing a wrapped covering over her body and pelvic areas. It also was on part her right leg and arm. She had completely red eyes, had skin that was black as darkness itself, and deep purple hair. She was human in form except for her height. She carried twin daggers on her side.
Another was 7 ft 5 who was bright red skinned, heavily muscled, and had humanoid form. He wore armor all around his body except for his head, which was exposed. The armor was black and gold with some bloodstains on it as well as some spikes to protect some areas from attack. He had 4 yellow eyes (One pair for day vision, other for night vision) with white rims around them, and had dirty gray hair. He carried a claymore on his back, in between his two red wings.
The portal closes quickly once they come threw. The girl looks around at the trees and plants. “Well its certainly greener then home,” She commented, in her somewhat high pitched girly voice.
“We are on a mortal planet, of course it’s greener,” The metal on said, in his ethereal male voice, ”Did you except it to look like home?”
“No. I’m kind of hungry. Hmmm, I think I’ll try that,” She said, approaching a bush. She tore off a leaf and ate it. “Better then the plants back home. Or is that an animal?” She asked after eating it.
“Don’t know. I’ll check my book,” the metal one said. He pulled out his book and said “Query: Green short leafy thing on a mortal planet.” The book flipped to a page that read as follows: Normally described as a bush, can have berries growing on it. Normally a plant, would retaliate if otherwise. “It’s a plant,” The metal one replied.
“Then I won’t touch it. I hate plants,” the red one said, in a deep voice, while pointing to his sharp teeth, obviously making him a carnivore.
“Ok, enough screwing around, we need to go. Tra’Dor stop eating the bushes,” She stopped,” Kron’Die, you can hunt dinner later, its time we go greet the warriors we are to be working with here,” The metal one said.
“I’m hungry though,” The winged one, named Kron’Die, replied.
“This is supposed to be a reasonably advanced place, I’ll get you a steak some where,” The metal one said back.
“What kind of steak, Ir’Cru, Ir’Doe?” Kron asked back.
“Cow,” The metal one answered after looking in his book.
“What’s a cow?” Kron asked.
“A fat slow creature breed for milk and food,” the metal one said in return.
“So God gave us hell and he gave whoever lives here cows. DAMN HIM!” Kron yelled.
“I doubt you can get God to go to hell,” Tra’Dor, the ebony girl, answered,” So, Annoron, any idea where here is.”
Annoron, the metal one, answered,” Hmm, well I believe it is called Earth. Although it has many mighty warrior\protectors on its surface, but without help they are no match against Hera and her armies. That’s why I was sent, and I picked you two to assist me.”
“You don’t need to remind us. Just hearing her name makes me shudder,” Kron said back.
“Here, Hera, Hera,” Tra repeated many times, annoying Kron. He gave her a good smack across the back of her head.
“You would do well to fear her as well,” Kron said, knowing she knew nothing of Hera.
“Why, she’s just some Kron’tada. I don’t care if she’s supposed to be the super-powerful queen figure, all you have to do is slither up their backsides and slit their throats,” Tra said,” Just because you two don’t know how isn’t my problem.”
“It will not be that easy to kill her. Anyways it is time we got a flyer’s eye view on this area. Tra, you can get on my back,” Annoron said.
“Ok,” She said, climbing up onto his back and clenching the far side of his shoulder plate. Kron and Annoron took off.
At the end of each chapter I will give meanings to any words that are unclear and state what language it is from.
Demon Words:
Kron: Means Destroyer or Slayer
Die: Means one who is such, basically Kron’Die means one who is a Slayer or Destroyer.
Tada: Means Lord or King of. Kron’ Tada means King of Destroyers or Slayers.
Tra: Means thief.
Dor: Means resourceful. Tra’Dor basically means Resourceful Thief.
Ir: Means small or feeble. Also used to refer to children.
Cru: Means fire breather. Ir’Cru is a baby dragon.
Doe: Means fire controller. Ir’Doe means imp.
I'll post the others after I get some response to this.