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Post by Power9x on May 2, 2007 19:17:11 GMT -4
Here is my OC for my fanfic, In The Shadows. He is a caucasian (not born that way though, see story for more details when I write that part, currently doing so) 17 year old in Jenny's class. He though, has 2 extra chromosomes in his body, and has evolved to control his soul, which can develop destructive shadow beings and do so. He first learned this power after a 30 year imprisonment by the Cluster (he is ageless like Jenny, her because of being a robot and him because of his developed powers, his shadow (soul, not literal) will not allow him to age. Stoped at Age 17) He becomes friends with Jenny from their mutual oddity compared to the popular crowd, and first met her through Brad, the first person he meets when he escapes the cluster to Tremorton. The BioPolice, a faction OC that I created, is searching for him because of his extra chromosomes, and his shadow killing the doctor who helped his mother give birth to him, and will destroy anyone in the way of that. He is a loner, somewhat quiet, but will get excited and speak loudly and quickly if he feels comfortable to do so. Somewhat like Sheldon without being nearly as geeky.
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Post by Power9x on May 3, 2007 22:13:29 GMT -4
Though, he also is the anti-jenny. He is the most powerful human on earth, she being the most powerful robot, he being corrupted by his past, her being innocent. That plays into the story as their fighting styles are completely different also, her focusing on her gadgets and hand to hand, and him focusing on energy flow and swordplay. He is the dark anti-hero human, she is the light hero robot.
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Post by Machaeus on May 3, 2007 22:17:13 GMT -4
Interesting idea. However, there's something that's not quite clear...
Clarification please? And have you checked out other fanchar bios?
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Post by Power9x on May 3, 2007 22:33:10 GMT -4
Interesting idea. However, there's something that's not quite clear... Clarification please? And have you checked out other fanchar bios? Sorry, I just wrote the fan fiction part with that, since he is evolved, a birth scar let out a soul based dark creature, though when he killed the doctor (read the fan fic (c1) to understand), he ended up killing a collegue of the professor(see fan fic chapter 3 who was working with him. Now, to seek revenge for killing his collegues and ruining any chance of a peaceful examination, he sets out to convince the government to fund his BioForce (chapater 6, haven't written yet) squadron, built on destroying Adam, and anyone in the way (this is where jenny comes in, for she is caught within the conflict when she befriends Adam and her friends are hurt along the way). I really need to rewrite this, the character has evolved a lot since I wrote this.
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Post by Power9x on May 3, 2007 22:48:32 GMT -4
Adam Willams is the next step in the evolution in humantiy. With his emotion becoming a seperate entity with the evolution, he gains an acual soul entity. Though this normally would be less harmless, him having a scar from birth has allowed the soul shadow to roam free from Adam. The first victim of this was Marcus Young, a doctor who starteled the shadow when he suspected him being a 47 chromosomed child, and being the perfect proof for not being as deadly as the 48. When he was 3 years old, he and his mother were captured by the cluster, and put to work as slaves. When his mother was killed by the slave drivesr, he snapped and also in turn, had no fear for he had nothing to lose, and nothing to gain. This allowed him to gain the power to control the shadow, though he would also lose control of it when it grew in form from strong emotion. After that day, he stopped aging from the shadow's influence. This depression of never accepting death after 19 years of being the same age, forced him to keep even more of his emotion under control. Though, on his last year on cluster prime, he snapped (in the universe of my fanfic, Vega never became queen) and killed every robot on Cluster Prive, including Vexus, in a controlled yet fury induced rage. After that, he returned to earth, though because of his delusions, he was sent to an asylum. When the colegue of the doctor from earlier finds out, through a last note from his collegue, he vows vengance, after he killed another doctor when he called him a Mutant Orphan Freak, and he snapped even by that slight insult because of his sensitive nature and recent awakining from a delusional flashback nightmare. After that day, he walked the crossroads untill he landed in the town of Tremorton. Then, he met Brad as the first person he met in the city, and later Jenny, along with others. Though when the professor brings his Biosquad, a government funded organization deticated to destroying Adam, and intertwines the lives of Jenny's family and friends with his own. Though, he also still lives along his murderous past, and if someone ticks him off, they are meat for the shadow.
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