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Post by Zero on Dec 20, 2007 20:26:55 GMT -4
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Post by ryota on Dec 20, 2007 20:47:26 GMT -4
So, put simply, you can't say "he did this to her" or "she did this for him" in whatever you're writing, right?
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Post by dude on Dec 20, 2007 20:59:30 GMT -4
So, put simply, you can't say "he did this to her" or "she did this for him" in whatever you're writing, right? theres a difference between, "she did this to him," and "she did this, this, that and this, put that there, did this with that, used that for that, opened that, closed that, and screamed her lungs out." one's fine, the other, well....
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Post by Zero on Dec 20, 2007 21:08:35 GMT -4
So, put simply, you can't say "he did this to her" or "she did this for him" in whatever you're writing, right? Exactly. Kissing, cuddling, etc... is okay though.
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Post by dude on Dec 20, 2007 21:10:54 GMT -4
theres a difference between, "she did this to him," and "she did this, this, that and this, put that there, did this with that, used that for that, opened that, closed that, and screamed her lungs out." one's fine, the other, well.... oh come on! this is funny!
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Post by White Lightning on Dec 20, 2007 21:11:58 GMT -4
So, put simply, you can't say "he did this to her" or "she did this for him" in whatever you're writing, right? Exactly. Kissing, cuddling, etc... is okay though. Got it!
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Post by Zero on Dec 20, 2007 21:12:24 GMT -4
Don't push the envelope now. ProBoards has spoken.
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Post by ryota on Dec 20, 2007 21:13:54 GMT -4
So, put simply, you can't say "he did this to her" or "she did this for him" in whatever you're writing, right? Exactly. Kissing, cuddling, etc... is okay though. Okay. What if we were to say "with a playful look on her face and a gleam in her eye, she promptly removed her clothes, as did he. The passionate love-making performed by the two carried on into the wee hours of the morning?" Would that still be acceptable?
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Post by dude on Dec 20, 2007 21:14:08 GMT -4
or you could say like, "they began taking off their clothes," then start a new paragraph, "'relax, it happens to everyone!' she said, trying to reassure him."
THATS comedy platinum
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Post by ryota on Dec 20, 2007 21:17:31 GMT -4
But my previous question still stands.
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Post by Zero on Dec 20, 2007 21:17:36 GMT -4
That seems okay, as long as you don't go into too much detail.
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I can't believe I'm saying this...
You guys totally ownd me on this subject.
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Post by ryota on Dec 20, 2007 21:19:34 GMT -4
Sorry to gloat, but I have to post this. It's only appropriate for this particular occasion. xj0.justgotowned.com/Not meant to be an insult.
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Post by Zero on Dec 20, 2007 21:24:31 GMT -4
Dude that is SOOOOOOO F'd UP!
I just cracked up! XD
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Post by White Lightning on Dec 20, 2007 21:25:43 GMT -4
Would you ban me if I said that link Ryota posted was funny?
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Post by ryota on Dec 20, 2007 21:26:59 GMT -4
Dude that is SOOOOOOO F'd UP! I just cracked up! XD Wanna do it to other people? Instead of "XJ0" in the address bar, substitute it for a different person's name, followed by .justgotowned.com.
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